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the main character in my book is anni. anni and her family heeded to leave their life and go to another country because her father is a doctor. anni heeds to leave her school, leave her friends, leave her family and start a hew life. anni didn't know what she needed to do, she need to decide if to stay in america with a friends or go away to another country with her family anni didn't know what she heeds tor the course of the book she decide to fly to another country. if i was the main character i would have decide to stay with my friends because i think that its very hard leave everything and learn a new language and new cultivating.
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