מה אתם חושבים על מה הפואמה שכתבתי?

I look in the mirror, but dont see me,
Just the reflection of who I wish to be.
A face that feels foreign, a body so empty and cold,
Trapped in a shell Ive never wished for.

Theres darkness inside, a void, a fear,
A voice that whispers, "You dont belong here."
I carry the weight of a life unlived,
A broken soul, with nothing to give.

Alive but dead, between life and death.
The world moves around me, but I stand still,
A shadow, waiting for something to fill.

I am here but lost, I am seen but not known,
A heart in the darkness, forever alone.
The light seems so distant, a fading glow
A never ending struggle inside my heart

I wish for something, for a hand to hold,
To find the warmth where Im feeling so cold.
But until then, Ill live in this world
Alive in my body, but lost in my thoughts.