היי כתבתי פואמה אשמח לכל ביקורת (אנגלית)

כותרת: Ophiocordyceps unilateralis



Jagged mountains lie in deathly sleep.

Mounds burrow into flesh, bone marrow, clawed out to tear and seep.

Swiftly cruising up through paved dirt paths belies the cliffs hiding deadly stones.

Killers emerge from silencing hills, their knives carved from bones.





Minerals thrash in a collapsing tunnel, diamonds growing out of eyes.

Worms bite through rotten skin, their homes made of dead flies.

Fungi spread through sick coughing streets, beasts clawing at each other for spores in the needle.





On quiet plains, the deer with broken legs suffer, hiding in fear

Water is clean, grass is enough.

Fleas chewing through make the skin turn tough

Blinded by the sun, hiding glints of rifle scope

Up the tower lies the god of the forest

With equal scales, he gives and takes away hope.